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= How to Create a GNU Hello World RPM Package = How to Create a GNU Hello World RPM Package
include::{partialsdir}/unreviewed-message.adoc[] This is a short hands-on tutorial on writing RPM files, showing how to quickly set up and create simple source and binary software packages.
This is a short hands-on tutorial on writing RPM files, showing how to quickly step up to create simple source and binary software packages.
It assumes some familiarity with using pre-made RPM packages, and with the FOSS building process. It assumes some familiarity with using pre-made RPM packages, and with the FOSS building process.
For comprehensive information on how to create RPM files, including more detailed tips, refer to xref:creating-rpm-packages.adoc[How to create an RPM package]. For comprehensive information on how to create RPM files, including more detailed tips, refer to xref:creating-rpm-packages.adoc[How to create an RPM package].
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- Initial version of the package - Initial version of the package
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The `Version` should mirror upstream while `Release` numbers our work within Fedora. The `Version` should mirror the upstream, while `Release` numbers our work within Fedora.
The first letter of the `Summary` should be uppercase to avoid `rpmlint` complaints. The first letter of the `Summary` should be uppercase to avoid `rpmlint` complaints.
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== History == History
Przemek Klosowski wrote this tutorial when he worked through link:https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Building_RPM_packages_(20090405)[Christoph Wickert's IRC session on building RPMs] using Rahul Sundaram suggestion of GNU "Hello World" as a test case. Przemek Klosowski wrote this tutorial when he worked through link:https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Building_RPM_packages_(20090405)[Christoph Wickert's IRC session on building RPMs] using Rahul Sundaram's suggestion of GNU "Hello World" as a test case.
After he wrote up his experience, he found out about the excellent and extensive xref:creating-rpm-packages.adoc[How to create an RPM package] page on this wiki, as well as the Christian Lyder Jacobsen's website, which is unfortunately not available anymore. After he wrote up his experience, he found out about the excellent and extensive xref:creating-rpm-packages.adoc[How to create an RPM package] page on this wiki, as well as the Christian Lyder Jacobsen's website, which is unfortunately not available anymore.
However, Christian isn't planning to update his site, and it seemed that a 5-minute 'fast food' alternative to the more extensive article might suit some people. However, Christian isn't planning to update his site, and it seemed that a 5-minute 'fast food' alternative to the more extensive article might suit some people.
More in-depth information on using and building RPM packages is available from link:dnf.adoc[other sources]. More in-depth information on using and building RPM packages is available from link:dnf.adoc[other sources].