From 61301fbf7200b8b09e4383f69d9554e4fe0b8df8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: yohaan vakil Date: Wed, 4 Mar 2020 13:46:20 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Updated and Reviewed modules/ROOT/pages/create-hello-world-rpm.adoc Small changes, grammar & readability fixes issue #219 needs review --- modules/ROOT/pages/create-hello-world-rpm.adoc | 8 +++----- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/modules/ROOT/pages/create-hello-world-rpm.adoc b/modules/ROOT/pages/create-hello-world-rpm.adoc index c628b2c..077cd9e 100644 --- a/modules/ROOT/pages/create-hello-world-rpm.adoc +++ b/modules/ROOT/pages/create-hello-world-rpm.adoc @@ -2,9 +2,7 @@ include::{partialsdir}/attributes.adoc[] = How to Create a GNU Hello World RPM Package -include::{partialsdir}/unreviewed-message.adoc[] - -This is a short hands-on tutorial on writing RPM files, showing how to quickly step up to create simple source and binary software packages. +This is a short hands-on tutorial on writing RPM files, showing how to quickly set up and create simple source and binary software packages. It assumes some familiarity with using pre-made RPM packages, and with the FOSS building process. For comprehensive information on how to create RPM files, including more detailed tips, refer to xref:creating-rpm-packages.adoc[How to create an RPM package]. @@ -96,7 +94,7 @@ project, including configuration, build, internationalization, help files, etc. - Initial version of the package ---- -The `Version` should mirror upstream while `Release` numbers our work within Fedora. +The `Version` should mirror the upstream, while `Release` numbers our work within Fedora. The first letter of the `Summary` should be uppercase to avoid `rpmlint` complaints. @@ -259,7 +257,7 @@ $ mock --verbose ../SRPMS/hello-2.10-1.fc25.src.rpm == History -Przemek Klosowski wrote this tutorial when he worked through link:https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Building_RPM_packages_(20090405)[Christoph Wickert's IRC session on building RPMs] using Rahul Sundaram suggestion of GNU "Hello World" as a test case. +Przemek Klosowski wrote this tutorial when he worked through link:https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Building_RPM_packages_(20090405)[Christoph Wickert's IRC session on building RPMs] using Rahul Sundaram's suggestion of GNU "Hello World" as a test case. After he wrote up his experience, he found out about the excellent and extensive xref:creating-rpm-packages.adoc[How to create an RPM package] page on this wiki, as well as the Christian Lyder Jacobsen's website, which is unfortunately not available anymore. However, Christian isn't planning to update his site, and it seemed that a 5-minute 'fast food' alternative to the more extensive article might suit some people. More in-depth information on using and building RPM packages is available from link:dnf.adoc[other sources].