Fixed typos/grammar in AutoUpdates

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Alysson D 2021-07-31 04:15:37 -03:00
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@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ single answer to this question: it is up to the system administrator or
owner of each machine to decide whether automatic updates are desirable
or not for that machine. One of the things which makes one a good system
administrator is the ability to evaluate the facts and other people's
suggestions, and then decide for onesself what one should do.
suggestions, and then decide for oneself what one should do.
A general rule that applies in most cases is as follows:
@ -37,32 +37,32 @@ started automatically.
[[install-and-settings-of-dnf-automatic]]
=== Install and settings of dnf-automatic
On a fresh install of Fedora 22 with default options the dnf-automatic
RPM is not installed, the first command below installs this RPM.
On a fresh install of Fedora 22 with default options, the dnf-automatic
RPM is not installed. The first command below installs this RPM:
[source,bash]
----
sudo dnf install dnf-automatic
----
By default, the dnf-automation runs from the configurations in `/etc/dnf/automation.conf` file. These configurations only download, but do not apply any of the packages. In order to change or add any configurations, open the `.conf` file as the root user (or using `sudo`) from a terminal window.
By default, dnf-automatic runs from the configurations in the `/etc/dnf/automatic.conf` file. These configurations only download, but do not apply any of the packages. In order to change or add any configurations, open the `.conf` file as the root user (or using `sudo`) from a terminal window.
[source,bash]
----
env EDITOR='gedit -w' sudoedit /etc/dnf/automatic.conf
----
Detailed description of dnf-automatic settings is provided on
Detailed description of dnf-automatic settings is provided on the
https://dnf.readthedocs.org/en/latest/automatic.html[dnf-automatic] page.
[[run-dnf-automatic]]
=== Run dnf-automatic
Once you are finished with configuration, execute:
Once you are finished with the configuration, execute:
[source,bash]
----
systemctl enable dnf-automatic.timer && systemctl start dnf-automatic.timer
systemctl enable --now dnf-automatic.timer 
----
to enable and start the `systemd` timer.
@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ problems during or after installation.
== Why use automatic updates?
The main advantage of automating the updates is that machines are likely
to get updated more quickly, more often, and more uniformly than if they
to get updated more quickly, more often, and more uniformly than if the
updates are done manually. We see too many compromised machines on the
internet which would have been safe if the latest updates where
installed in a timely way.
@ -159,13 +159,13 @@ automatic updates are:
* You installed a custom kernel, custom kernel modules, third party
kernel modules, or have a third party application that depends on kernel
versions (this may not be a problem if you exclude kernel updates, which
is the default in Fedora `dnf.conf` files). (But see also
is the default in Fedora `dnf.conf` files). (See also
https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=870790[bug #870790] - you
may need to modify in Fedora 22 or later versions in base section to add
`exclude=kernel*`.)
* Your environment requires meticulous change-control procedures.
* You update from other third party DNF repositories besides Fedora
(core, extras, legacy ) repositories which may conflict in versioning
(core, extras, legacy), repositories which may conflict in versioning
schemes for the same packages.
There are also some other reasons why installing automatic updates
@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ without testing may be a bad idea. A few such reasons are:
particularly ones which have cron jobs. Updates to base packages like
openssl, openldap, sql servers, etc. can have an effect on many other
seemingly unrelated packages.
* Bugs. Many packages contain buggy software or installation scripts.
* Bugs. Many packages contain buggy software on installation scripts.
The update may create problems during or after installation. Even
cosmetic bugs, like those found in previous Mozilla updates causing the
user's icons to be removed or break, can be annoying or problematic.
@ -202,10 +202,10 @@ things to make sure you are up-to-date.
Check for package updates which have been automatically performed, and
note if they need further (manual) intervention. You can monitor what
DNF or updated via its log file (usually `/var/log/dnf.log`).
DNF has updated via its log file (usually `/var/log/dnf.log`).
You can monitor updates availability automatically by email after
modifying dnf-automatic configuration file (usually `/etc/dnf/automatic.conf`).
modifying the dnf-automatic configuration file (usually `/etc/dnf/automatic.conf`).
[source,bash]
----
@ -223,10 +223,10 @@ email_to = root
email_host = localhost
----
You would replace root with a actual email address to which you want to
report sent, and localhost with a actual address of SMTP server. This
You would replace root with an actual email address to which you want the
report sent, and localhost with an actual address of a SMTP server. This
change will mean that after dnf-automatic runs, it will email you
information you about available updates, or log about downloaded
information about available updates, a log about downloaded
packages, or installed updates according to settings in `automatic.conf`.
[[alternative-methods]]
@ -244,12 +244,12 @@ more complexity to configure.
sudo dnf install auter
----
Edit the configuration. Descriptions of the options are contained in the
You should then edit the configuration. Descriptions of the options are contained in the
conf file `/etc/auter/auter.conf`.
Auter is not scheduled by default. Add a schedule for `--prep` (if you
want to pre-download updates) and `--apply` (install updates). The
installed cron job which you can see in `/etc/cron.d/auter` contains lots of examples:
installed cron job which you can see in `/etc/cron.d/auter` contains lots of examples.
To make auter run immediately without waiting for the cron job to run,
for example for testing or debugging, you can simply run it from the
@ -274,15 +274,15 @@ auter --disable
=== Notifications
Instead of automatic updates, dnf-automatic can only download new
updates and can alert your via email of available updates which you
could then install manually. It can be set by editing of `/etc/dnf/automatic.conf` file.
updates and can alert you via email of available updates which you
could then install manually. This can be set by editing of `/etc/dnf/automatic.conf` file.
[[scheduling-updates]]
=== Scheduling updates
Another common problem is having automatic updates run when it isn't
desired (holidays, weekends, vacations, etc). If there are times that no
one will be around to fix any problem arising the from the updates, it
one will be around to fix any problem arising from the updates, it
may be best to avoid doing updates on those days.
This problem can be fixed by modification of the timer of dnf-automatic
@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ page.
=== Other methods of protection
Yet another thing to consider if not using automatic updates is to
provide your machine with some other forms of protection to help defend
provide your machine with some other forms of protection to help defend it of
any attacks that might occur before updates are in place. This might
include an external firewall, a host-based firewall (like iptables,
ipchains, and/or tcp wrappers), not performing dangerous tasks on the