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*Red Hat Enterprise Linux* (or RHEL) is a commercially supported
derivative of Fedora tailored to meet the requirements of enterprise
customers. It is a commercial product from Red Hat which also sponsors
Fedora as a community project. Fedora is upstream for Red Hat Enterprise
Linux but there are several other link:Derived_distributions[Derived
distributions] available too.
customers. RHEL is a commercial product distributed by Red Hat (Red Hat also sponsors
Fedora as a community project). Fedora is an upstream source for RHEL, but there are many other link:Derived_distributions[Derived
distributions] that are based on Fedora.
[[whats-the-difference-between-fedora-and-red-hat-enterprise-linux]]
What's the difference between Fedora and Red Hat Enterprise Linux?
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http://www.redhatmagazine.com/2008/09/16/video-the-history-of-fedora/[Red
Hat Magazine].
Both Fedora and Red Hat Enterprise Linux are open source. Fedora is a
Both Fedora and Red Hat Enterprise Linux are open source operating systems. Fedora is a
free distribution and community project and upstream for Red Hat
Enterprise Linux. Fedora is a general purpose system that gives Red Hat
and the rest of its contributor community the chance to innovate rapidly